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		<title>Comment on Gender Report on Your Story by Jennifer Shepard</title>
		<link>http://thebluepencil.wordpress.com/2008/03/15/gender-report-on-your-story/#comment-224</link>
		<dc:creator>Jennifer Shepard</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Apr 2008 21:06:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Female Score: 1401
Male Score: 1218

Bingo! The Gender Genie got it right. But I thought it was funny that a huge part of my female score was the word &quot;she,&quot; which is a natural result of the story being about a woman. Another big one was &quot;not,&quot; but I don&#039;t know why that word is female.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Female Score: 1401<br />
Male Score: 1218</p>
<p>Bingo! The Gender Genie got it right. But I thought it was funny that a huge part of my female score was the word &#8220;she,&#8221; which is a natural result of the story being about a woman. Another big one was &#8220;not,&#8221; but I don&#8217;t know why that word is female.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Gender Report on Your Story by Jessica</title>
		<link>http://thebluepencil.wordpress.com/2008/03/15/gender-report-on-your-story/#comment-222</link>
		<dc:creator>Jessica</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Apr 2008 04:16:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The Gender Genie&#039;s algorithm is flawed. My score was: Female: 522, Male: 1450, meaning the Gender Genie overwhelmingly thinks I am male. It&#039;s interesting that words like &quot;the&quot; and &quot;said&quot; are supposed to me male, because &quot;said&quot; is such a common and necessary word in news writing when quoting people. Maybe the Gender Genie is sexist and thinks only men are news writers. I don&#039;t think there&#039;s much validity to its science.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The Gender Genie&#8217;s algorithm is flawed. My score was: Female: 522, Male: 1450, meaning the Gender Genie overwhelmingly thinks I am male. It&#8217;s interesting that words like &#8220;the&#8221; and &#8220;said&#8221; are supposed to me male, because &#8220;said&#8221; is such a common and necessary word in news writing when quoting people. Maybe the Gender Genie is sexist and thinks only men are news writers. I don&#8217;t think there&#8217;s much validity to its science.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Gender Report on Your Story by Lori</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lori</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Apr 2008 03:31:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Female Score: 1260
Male Score: 1136

It&#039;s interesting that possessive words and words that deal with human relationships (we, myself) are feminine. Masculine words are words with authority and certainty (is, are) and feminine words are more unsure (if, should).</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Female Score: 1260<br />
Male Score: 1136</p>
<p>It&#8217;s interesting that possessive words and words that deal with human relationships (we, myself) are feminine. Masculine words are words with authority and certainty (is, are) and feminine words are more unsure (if, should).</p>
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		<title>Comment on Gender Report on Your Story by Rene Perez</title>
		<link>http://thebluepencil.wordpress.com/2008/03/15/gender-report-on-your-story/#comment-220</link>
		<dc:creator>Rene Perez</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 15 Apr 2008 21:38:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Female Score: 1834
Male Score: 2121

It thinks I write like I man, which is good I guess. An interesting little test, but I&#039;m not sure how accurate it is, judging from the other responses.

The little chart at the bottom was interesting to examine as well.</description>
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Male Score: 2121</p>
<p>It thinks I write like I man, which is good I guess. An interesting little test, but I&#8217;m not sure how accurate it is, judging from the other responses.</p>
<p>The little chart at the bottom was interesting to examine as well.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Gender Report on Your Story by Elizabeth</title>
		<link>http://thebluepencil.wordpress.com/2008/03/15/gender-report-on-your-story/#comment-219</link>
		<dc:creator>Elizabeth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 15 Apr 2008 20:58:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Female Score: 767
Male Score: 1145

I dunno, I guess I write like a man?</description>
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Male Score: 1145</p>
<p>I dunno, I guess I write like a man?</p>
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		<title>Comment on Gender Report on Your Story by kagnello</title>
		<link>http://thebluepencil.wordpress.com/2008/03/15/gender-report-on-your-story/#comment-218</link>
		<dc:creator>kagnello</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 Apr 2008 15:19:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Female: 1859
Male: 1490

I can see the insult coming now -- &quot;You write like a girl!&quot; Well, I guess it&#039;s kind of neat to see how many masculine words you use in your writing as compared to how many feminine words. 

How did they determine words as masculine or feminine? Why is &quot;the,&quot; which I used 46 times in my story, considered masculine and &quot;and,&quot; which I used 43 times, considered feminine? I think it&#039;s all a little strange to me.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Female: 1859<br />
Male: 1490</p>
<p>I can see the insult coming now &#8212; &#8220;You write like a girl!&#8221; Well, I guess it&#8217;s kind of neat to see how many masculine words you use in your writing as compared to how many feminine words. </p>
<p>How did they determine words as masculine or feminine? Why is &#8220;the,&#8221; which I used 46 times in my story, considered masculine and &#8220;and,&#8221; which I used 43 times, considered feminine? I think it&#8217;s all a little strange to me.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Gender Report on Your Story by Nick Rosinia</title>
		<link>http://thebluepencil.wordpress.com/2008/03/15/gender-report-on-your-story/#comment-217</link>
		<dc:creator>Nick Rosinia</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 13 Apr 2008 23:07:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Female Score: 1700
Male Score: 2779

Haha, The story thing got me all kinds of right. My story was overwhelmingly written by a male, which is good because I am a male.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Female Score: 1700<br />
Male Score: 2779</p>
<p>Haha, The story thing got me all kinds of right. My story was overwhelmingly written by a male, which is good because I am a male.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Gender Report on Your Story by Matt Schatzel</title>
		<link>http://thebluepencil.wordpress.com/2008/03/15/gender-report-on-your-story/#comment-216</link>
		<dc:creator>Matt Schatzel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Apr 2008 16:50:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Okay so I&#039;m just a little bit offended. The Gender Genie thinks I&#039;m a woman. My female score was 1461 while my male score was 1199. I guess I have a feminine writing style. Is this bad? Should my manhood feel threatened? Or should I be proud I can fool even the smartest of algorithms? Oh well. At least I got my readability down from about a 16 to a little bit over 12. I&#039;ll take it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Okay so I&#8217;m just a little bit offended. The Gender Genie thinks I&#8217;m a woman. My female score was 1461 while my male score was 1199. I guess I have a feminine writing style. Is this bad? Should my manhood feel threatened? Or should I be proud I can fool even the smartest of algorithms? Oh well. At least I got my readability down from about a 16 to a little bit over 12. I&#8217;ll take it.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Gender Report on Your Story by Rachael Curran</title>
		<link>http://thebluepencil.wordpress.com/2008/03/15/gender-report-on-your-story/#comment-215</link>
		<dc:creator>Rachael Curran</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Apr 2008 13:21:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My story&#039;s female score is 1088 and its male score is 978.  The Genie was right-- I am a female!  I guess my writing isn&#039;t overwhelmingly feminine or masculine, but based on the theory behind the algorithm, I think feminine writing would be better writing.  

Apparently, men are concerned about things and women are concerned about the connections people have with those things.   Men show this in their writing by using articles and women show this by using possessives.  I think it&#039;s crap.  It also doesn&#039;t explain why using words like &quot;she&quot; would be feminine.  What if the focus of a man&#039;s story is a woman?  That would greatly effect his female score, but wouldn&#039;t necessarily mean that he&#039;s talking about connections more so than if he used the word &quot;he&quot; in his story rather than &quot;she.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My story&#8217;s female score is 1088 and its male score is 978.  The Genie was right&#8211; I am a female!  I guess my writing isn&#8217;t overwhelmingly feminine or masculine, but based on the theory behind the algorithm, I think feminine writing would be better writing.  </p>
<p>Apparently, men are concerned about things and women are concerned about the connections people have with those things.   Men show this in their writing by using articles and women show this by using possessives.  I think it&#8217;s crap.  It also doesn&#8217;t explain why using words like &#8220;she&#8221; would be feminine.  What if the focus of a man&#8217;s story is a woman?  That would greatly effect his female score, but wouldn&#8217;t necessarily mean that he&#8217;s talking about connections more so than if he used the word &#8220;he&#8221; in his story rather than &#8220;she.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>Comment on Figure the readability of the first draft of your story by Rachael Curran</title>
		<link>http://thebluepencil.wordpress.com/2008/03/05/figure-the-readability-of-the-first-draft-of-your-story/#comment-214</link>
		<dc:creator>Rachael Curran</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 26 Mar 2008 18:27:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Gunning Fog Index- 10.45
Major punctuation- 71
Words 835
3+-syllable words- 120

It seems my story has a desired readability level.  I tend to write simply in my stories, yet I was still expecting a higher index because of the nature of this particular story.  The word “acupuncture” appears several times throughout my story, and was counted as a four-syllable word, yet there is no alternative word I could have used.  Interestingly, “curiosity” is also counted as a complex word since it has five syllables.  
	I question the accuracy involved in equating complexity with multiple syllables.  There are many monosyllabic words that I’m sure the average high school senior would not know.  These doubts aside, and when considering that many of my three-syllable and four-syllable words are in fact simple words, perhaps my story’s readability level is really much lower than 10.45.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Gunning Fog Index- 10.45<br />
Major punctuation- 71<br />
Words 835<br />
3+-syllable words- 120</p>
<p>It seems my story has a desired readability level.  I tend to write simply in my stories, yet I was still expecting a higher index because of the nature of this particular story.  The word “acupuncture” appears several times throughout my story, and was counted as a four-syllable word, yet there is no alternative word I could have used.  Interestingly, “curiosity” is also counted as a complex word since it has five syllables.<br />
	I question the accuracy involved in equating complexity with multiple syllables.  There are many monosyllabic words that I’m sure the average high school senior would not know.  These doubts aside, and when considering that many of my three-syllable and four-syllable words are in fact simple words, perhaps my story’s readability level is really much lower than 10.45.</p>
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